Consternation: A poem

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Monday, 03-Nov-2008 19:12:20

If right is wrong
and wrong is left,
then which way shall
we go?
The lines are crooked,
our vision is skewed,
and the flame is losing
its glow.
If we turn left
and think it's right,
then wrong is all
we know.
When the right
is left behind,
the wrong continues
to grow.

Unfocused eyes,
trembling hands,
uncertainty controls
our feet.
We're going to the somewhere
that leads to the nowhere
at the beginning of a
dead-end street.
Our nodding heads
and swaying hips
try so hard to grasp
the beat.
Our feet stumble
and our butts search
for the holy and
overstuffed seat.

If right is wrong
and wrong is left,
then which way shall
we turn?
Lead yourself and
follow your instincts
is now the
lesson learned.
Comprehension and clarity
are two things
we long for
and yearn.
But we fear the flame
because if it's too strong,
it will cause everything
to burn.

Post 2 by Ok Sure (This site is so "educational") on Tuesday, 04-Nov-2008 1:21:14

*snap snap snap snap*

Cool man, cool.

Post 3 by PorkInCider (Wind assisted.) on Tuesday, 04-Nov-2008 9:51:14

Hey Raven, I love it, it's different, but great.

Post 4 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 04-Nov-2008 10:34:34

wow, very cool flowitude[and if that's not a word, I made it up] I like this, very much.